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Hasse's avatar

When asked what their greatest love was, this person answered: “Creating a heaven on earth with those I care about.”

In regard to their fear, they wrote: “Not finding a heaven in the afterlife.”

Heaven was the recurring element, and that is what the poem grew out of.

To me, it speaks to an aspiration and a hope for something good. Something beautiful and redeeming.

I tried to stay true to that lofty drive and noble disposition.

Doing that inspired me! So, thanks for those answers, whoever you are.

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James Hart's avatar

This was certainly a fun one!

"move the wooden house

of every book I know.

I’ll lift up every painting

with colors of the truth."

Loved the way you played around with framing the ideas in here.

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