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Hasse's avatar

This person’s greatest love was “freedom and myself.”

Their greatest fear was being trapped forever as a constant caretaker, and never living their own dreams.

I don’t want to write too much about this one, since I think it deserves to speak for itself…

~

Since writing it, I’ve caught myself mumbling “know me well…” under my breath more than once — typically while doing mundane tasks like carrying the groceries and things like that.

I don’t mind it.

~

Take care!

— Hasse

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James Hart's avatar

Very nice, Hasse. Indeed I think you conveyed enough in the poem to allow the idea to speak for itself. I think it's something we all consider at some point. My favorite lines:

Bring me in! Unlock the hatch

to where your treasures are,

and here, I shall exist,

until the final line.

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