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Hasse's avatar

This person loved their family and feared losing a loved one.

Naturally, it led to a poem that was very concerned with those familial bonds.

It’s a love I enjoyed exploring and a fear that was a bit challenging to write about.

To lose a loved one is hard enough to face when it’s happened, but to willingly face it when it hasn’t, without succumbing to pure misery, required me to do my best.

I hope it was good enough.

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James Hart's avatar

Love how much you were able to put into those last couple lines; so few words to describe an idea while also putting into context. Very nicely done.

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Hasse's avatar

Thank you, James. Those last few lines really make the poem for me, personally, so I'm happy they connected for you.

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Btw, if you find the time and you feel like it, I'd love for you to read the guest poem I recently wrote. A lot went into that one:

https://whenhopewrites.substack.com/p/guest-post-hasses-love-letter-to

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James Hart's avatar

Oh awesome, will-do! Thanks for mentioning!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Beautiful, beautiful poem

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Hasse's avatar

Thank you so much, Kathleen. It means a lot!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

You're welcome

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